good work, BUT...
Allright. The cymbals could be more subliminal. And what the...?! What did you do with the ending??
Nice drums, but they do absolutely not fit to the rest of the song. Too... peppy ^^
And then a fade-out, man, you can do better.
so, 9/... no, 8/10
Danke fürs Review, aber les mal besser Titel & Beschreibung ^^ es ist ne WIP Version, daher das Fade-out und in der Beschreibung steht dass ich das erst weiter mache wenn ich passende Drums für den letzten Part habe :P
By the way... how did you record that?
Good job, I just thought you could (I hope thats the right word...) put some more expression into the part the left hand plays. That's all.
I plugged my keyboard to my 'line-in' jacket of the pc, and recorded it with audacity.
I'll try to, although it's not easy to play 'piano' or 'pianissimo' and make the 'espressivo' clear enough. Thx for the review.
Amy Macdonald-TRANCE ^^
One thing: I wouldn't have used fade-out for the ending.
hehe thanks :P yeah i know, maybe i should fix that ;P
sounds good, quite clear, good mix!
But only 8/10 because the vocals are absolutely missing!
thanks man! this is the version with no vocals....I thought It sounded better without it
Nice surprise ;)
I've read the score while listening and it's very professional. Good melody, but very remarkable is the way you worked with the volume, that's something which is forgotten very often. Primarily in sequenced pieces.
So, good that it's a live recording.
And it's also great that you used the instruments' possibilities, for example the "slide" in bar 162.
Very good, you've earned my respect!
Thank you very much for review. I'm always happy when I see people that have some musical experience. Their opinion is always important to me so I'm happy too, when I see it's positive. If you want to perform it or If you know someone who wants to, just PM me and I will give you parts. Thx again for rview :D
...I think there's too much distortion in the whole song. And try to put some reverb to the beginning. And do an EQ to the guitar.
But all in all: Good job!
Am Original orientiert.. ;)
Of course you took the original theme as "inspiration", and this theme is what makes this piece so great. Nevertheless, good variation und orchestration.
10/10... `cuz its you ;-)
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